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| Caroline Horton's 'Islands', Bush Theatre Company |
This is our feedback:
- To push the archetypes and the characters.
- To focus more on the scene with the tax evasion with Luke as the Tax Collector.
- To maybe add a moment of song (which we decided to be MONEY MONEY MONEY BY ABBA)
- To have a think about costumes that fit the idea of an island.
- Beginning scene was confusing and didn't make much sense to the whole performance.
Taking this feedback on board, we scrapped the beginning scene and pushed the tax collection scene to the end of the performance and made this the main focus of the whole piece. This was done as we felt that the scene had much more potential than the others we created.
However, our rehearsal day didn't go to plan. We were constantly battling with half of our group being missing, meaning we were restricted as to what we could devise as the scene centres around Luke as the Tax Collector. And we were also finding the whole rehearsal process very tedious and stressful.
By the end of the day we had created no more than half a minutes worth of performance with a creative block on how to move forward.
We did however agree on costume. I shall wear a Starbucks costume to push the physical comedy of the big businesses avoiding tax.
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